Soft, like the inside of a banana peel. Hard, like the weight of a bear.
Loose, like the hug of an alzheimer's patient.
Cold, like the floor in the morning.
Metaphor, like you don't usually see.
Saturday, August 4, 2012
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ReplyDeleteBears aren't generally that hard, are they?
These all have the weight of sadness to them.
The weight of a bear is probably incredibly hard.
ReplyDeleteAs in difficult? Or . . . or . . . hard to BEAR?
ReplyDeleteSorry.