Dance in the Full Moon

O, the Frailty of Memory

Saturday, August 4, 2012

8.4

Soft, like the inside of a banana peel. Hard, like the weight of a bear.
Loose, like the hug of an alzheimer's patient.
Cold, like the floor in the morning.

Metaphor, like you don't usually see.

3 comments:

  1. Simile sentence fragments.

    Bears aren't generally that hard, are they?

    These all have the weight of sadness to them.

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  2. The weight of a bear is probably incredibly hard.

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  3. As in difficult? Or . . . or . . . hard to BEAR?

    Sorry.

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