Dance in the Full Moon

Dance in the Full Moon

O, the Frailty of Memory

Sunday, April 10, 2011

4.10b

The duck gave himself a shake and threw himself into the air.
The dog perked up his ears and stiffened to bark.
The deer froze to listen to the approaching rumble.

It was another cliche scene and then the same normal thing happened, just like you would expect.

6 comments:

  1. anelles47April 10, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    A DUCK!

    (Exactly! So . . . logically . . . )

    That's what happened, right? They caught the duck and weighed it and then let it go so it could quack "Aflac!" into the echoing canyon?

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  2. Robby Van ArsdaleApril 11, 2011 at 4:18 AM

    Um, probably.

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  3. anelles47April 11, 2011 at 7:09 AM

    :-D

    Perfect!

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  4. AliApril 13, 2011 at 8:07 AM

    I love your endings. I also like the visual of a duck throwing itself into the air and a dog stiffening to bark.

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  5. Robby Van ArsdaleApril 13, 2011 at 8:12 AM

    Sadly, the ending came from Chris Dant. It was not my doing. He was just so disdainful of what I was doing that he just said it. I didn't feel that they were too cliche, other than the deer, but whatever. It was better than the route I was going, so I ran with it.

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  6. anelles47April 13, 2011 at 8:50 AM

    Aww, well, I love how it all comes together.

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